I think that Steven Lopez is the greatest athlete of all time. He is a Tae Kwon Do olympic fighter. He has 2 golds and 1 bronze at the Olympics. He is also a 5time world champion and a 2time Pan an American Gold medalist. And a 15time national team member.
I don't know much about Tae Kwon Do. I think you should give some backcround information about Tae Kwon Do to help the readers.
ReplyDeleteI think he sounds like an interesting athlete, but maybe tell it a little more. I think you have a good start though.
ReplyDeleteI really like this piece of writing, but I think that you should add why you like this person, or why you chose to write about him. :)
ReplyDeletei like the piece. I think it is interesting but i also think you should add more information about him and tae kwon do.
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